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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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How many times have you looked at another sister and thought to yourself, ‘her life seems so perfect? She’s polished, successful, confident, and in control. She doesn't have a care in the world. I wish that were me’.
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How many times have you looked at another sister and thought to yourself: "Her life seems so perfect. She’s polished, successful, confident, and in control. She doesn't have a care in the world. I wish that were me"?
Here is what I thought:
How many times have you looked at another sister and thought to yourself: "Her life seems so perfect. She’s polished, successful, confident, and in control. She doesn't have a care in the world. I wish that were me"?
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This seems tricky, because you have a complete thought making up the question, while you have separate statements within it. I think your second option accomplishes that better than the first.
- This seems tricky, because you have a complete thought making up the question, while you have separate statements within it.
- I think your second option accomplishes that better than the first.
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This seems tricky, because you have a complete thought making up the question, while you have separate statements within it. I think your second option accomplishes that better than the first.
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