"ours secret" should be "our secret". The sentence is otherwise OK.
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jasonkhlimHow do I connect promising not to tell anyone aboutI don't think it should have a comma to begin with. As I read it, it's a document promising not to tell anyone your secret.oursour secret with Do you remember that document which you made for John without using a comma?