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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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How could write the following sentences better.
In addition, due to being critically injured, the tornado claimed the life of a 14th Macon County resident on March 13, 2008.
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In addition, damage was reported at , where a lost its roof, the freight terminal's fire station suffered roof damage, (FedEx service was disrupted due to flight delays and closed roads from the tornado damage in surrounding areas) trucks were thrown 100 yards (91 m), and aircraft were moved around, including a that was moved one foot.
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In addition, damage was reported at , where a lost its roof, the freight terminal's fire station suffered roof damage, (FedEx service was disrupted due to flight delays and closed roads from the tornado damage in surrounding areas) trucks were thrown 100 yards (91 m), and aircraft were moved around, including a that was moved one foot.
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Hi, In addition, due to being critically injured, the tornado claimed the life of a 14th Macon County resident on March 13, 2008. This sounds like the tornado was critically injured. In addition, on March 13, 2008 , the tornado claimed the life of a 14th Macon County resident who had been critically injured.
- Hi, In addition, due to being critically injured, the tornado claimed the life of a 14th Macon County resident on March 13, 2008.
- This sounds like the tornado was critically injured.
- In addition, on March 13, 2008 , the tornado claimed the life of a 14th Macon County resident who had been critically injured.
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Hi,
| In addition, due to being critically injured, the tornado claimed the life of a 14th Macon County resident on March 13, 2008. This sounds like the tornado was critically injured.  In addition |
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