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Kappack20 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

How could I re-write or shorten this sentence?

I am writing an opening sentence for the coverletter's second paragraph - the skills and experience paragraph. Here is what I have so far but I feel like I could shorten this:

My customer service background has provided me with considerable experience in making and taking a high volume of telephone calls.
  

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Hello, Kappack—and welcome to English Forums. My customer service background has provided me with experience in high-volume telephone calls.

  • Hello, Kappack—and welcome to English Forums.
  • My customer service background has provided me with experience in high-volume telephone calls.
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Hello, Kappack—and welcome to English Forums.

My customer service background has provided me with experience in high-volume telephone calls.
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Thank you Mister Micawber!

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