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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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How could I phrase this? Too much info

There is too much info. I can't seem to make a sentence that is correct.
Could you help me please reword?

Lets see what the longest consecutive number of games we can score a touchdown first to start a season. The longest streak of touchdowns scored first is 8. The team had score a touchdown first in 8 games to start the season.

Lets see how many games we can win in a row to start a season. The record is 15-0 to start a season held by...

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As we begin football season, let's see if we can beat one of these records. The first record was set in 1998 by Team Aerodynamic Superstars. They scored the first touchdown on the first and the seven subsequent games of the season.

  • As we begin football season, let's see if we can beat one of these records.
  • The first record was set in 1998 by Team Aerodynamic Superstars.
  • They scored the first touchdown on the first and the seven subsequent games of the season.
  • In the ninth game, their opponents scored first.
  • The second record was set in 2003 by Team Super Yellow Submarine.
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As we begin football season, let's see if we can beat one of these records.

The first record was set in 1998 by Team Aerodynamic Superstars. They scored the first touchdown on the first and the seven subsequent games of the season. In the ninth game, their opponents scored first.

The second record was set in 2003 by Team Super Yellow Submarine. They won the first fifteen games th
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If I wanted to put it in a sentence with stating examples how would I say it then?

I read in an article "Then, the 2015-16 version of the team broke the NBA recordfor wins to start a season with a 16-0 start." Is "to start a season" correct to you?
Are these correct? Would you change anything?
Lets see in how many consecutive we can score a touchdown first to start a season.
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"Then, the 2015-16 version of the team broke the NBA record for wins to start a season with a 16-0 record."

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