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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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How can I write this the best possible way?
Hi! I have a feeling that this is written poorly. How can I write this the best possible way?
The bellman led me down a hallway with rooms on one side while the other had an open view down to the floor below.
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The bellman led me down a hallway that opened into a gallery with rooms on one side and a view down to the floor below on the other.
- The bellman led me down a hallway that opened into a gallery with rooms on one side and a view down to the floor below on the other.
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The bellman led me down a hallway that opened into a gallery with rooms on one side and a view down to the floor below on the other.
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