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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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I have attached an excel sheet which will have the details about the replication in the XXX Account. Prepared this document for the basis of doing daily monitoring activity, as far as my knowledge concern I have founded two set of instance for replication and it has been documented in the excel sheet.

Therefore, I request you to give inputs if I have missed any of the replication servers in the xxx account.

Additionally, need some details with reference to the test server environment.



Please correct the above sentence to form the better statement.

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I have attached an Excel spreadsheet which has the details about the replication in the *** Accoun t. This document was prepared for daily monitoring . I have found two instances of replication , and they are documented in the spreadsheet .

  • I have attached an Excel spreadsheet which has the details about the replication in the *** Accoun t.
  • This document was prepared for daily monitoring .
  • I have found two instances of replication , and they are documented in the spreadsheet .
  • Please give me input if I have missed any of the replicated servers in the account .
  • Additionally, I need details with reference to the test server environment.
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I have attached an Excel spreadsheet which has the details about the replication in the *** Account. This document was prepared for daily monitoring. I have found two instances of replication, and they are documented in the spreadsheet.

Please give me input if I have missed any of the replicated servers in the ac

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