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Soniat Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
How can I spice up my narrative essay?
I am writing about a big horse show that I competed at, which was overall a very good experience. However, I noticed that my writing does not portray the excitement that I felt.
The main point of my narrative essay is the moment where my horse and I are suspended in midair over a jump that every other horse refused. I was scared to death coming up to it, and the relief I felt as my horse took the jump without hesitation mingled with the familiar joy I feel each time we soar over a fence together.
That one moment is extremely emotional, but I can't get that to come across when I write it. Some interesting adjectives would be helpful, as well as any tips that you can think of.
Thanks everyone....
The main point of my narrative essay is the moment where my horse and I are suspended in midair over a jump that every other horse refused. I was scared to death coming up to it, and the relief I felt as my horse took the jump without hesitation mingled with the familiar joy I feel each time we soar over a fence together.
That one moment is extremely emotional, but I can't get that to come across when I write it. Some interesting adjectives would be helpful, as well as any tips that you can think of.
Thanks everyone....
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Well, you have presented no portion of your essay, so I can only offer blind advice, but a common way of 'spicing' up a narrative is to write it in present tense. Have you done that?
- Well, you have presented no portion of your essay, so I can only offer blind advice, but a common way of 'spicing' up a narrative is to write it in present tense.
- Have you done that?
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Well, you have presented no portion of your essay, so I can only offer blind advice, but a common way of 'spicing' up a narrative is to write it in present tense. Have you done that?
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