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Samsoner2 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
How can I shorten both sentences?
This is for a salesperson resume.
• Operated a POS system for sales transactions, product orders and inventory checks.
• Coordinated with other stores to ensure that customers received their product orders.
• Operated a POS system for sales transactions, product orders and inventory checks.
• Coordinated with other stores to ensure that customers received their product orders.
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samsoner2 This is for a salesperson resume. • Coordinated with other stores to ensure that customers received their product orders. I can't think of how to shorten the first one unless you feel you can omit the "sales transactions" since that's what a Point of Sale system is for.
- samsoner2 This is for a salesperson resume.
- • Coordinated with other stores to ensure that customers received their product orders.
- I can't think of how to shorten the first one unless you feel you can omit the "sales transactions" since that's what a Point of Sale system is for.
- * Coordinated with other stores to ensure orders were received.
- -- maybe.
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samsoner2 This is for a salesperson resume. • Operated a POS system for sales transactions, product orders and inventory checks.• Coordinated with other stores to ensure that customers received their product orders.I can't think of how to shorten the first one unless you feel you can omit the "sales transactions" since that's what a Point of Sale system is fo
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These are not sentences. They lack a subject. But they are OK as bullet points. It's difficult to shorten your points without losing content, but here are a couple of alternates:
- Well-versed in all POS operations (sales, orders, inventory)
- Maximized sales by locating products in stock at other locations for customers
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