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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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How can i reword this sentence? or make it shorter?

For most people daily life is a constant series of decisions and choices, from the most trivial to the most important. These choices help to fashion the quality of a person’s life and that of the family to which they belong. Most choices, however, have resource implications. They involve decisions about how to use the scarce resources at one’s disposal. For poor people, with few resources, the area of effective choice is constricted, and one measure of the depth of poverty is the narrowness of remaining choice.
  

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Poor people have few choices. Clive

  • Poor people have few choices.
  • Clive
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Our lives are a series of choices Most choices use resources.Poor people have few choices.

Clive
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is there anyway i can add more to that? sorry english not first language
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You said 'shorter', so that's what I gave you.

If you want to add more, go ahead and try. I'll check your work.
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how about this?

For most people, their lives depends on the series of choices. For the wealthy, there are generally more options, for the poor, the choices are far more restricted. For instance, the poor may have to decide on the cheapest category of food they can afford. While the rich may have to decide of the many choice available without restrictions.
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For most people, their lives depend on a series of choices. For the wealthy, there are generally more options. For the poor, the choices are far more restricted. For instance, the poor may have to decide on the cheapest category of food they can afford, while the rich can select from the many choice available without restriction.

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