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Cristina Benjumea Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
How can i reword this sentence
to where it flows more smoothly?
i feel like it doesn't really make sense.
Yet their presence drew each of them immensly.
i feel like it doesn't really make sense.
Yet their presence drew each of them immensly.
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Cristina Benjumea i I feel like it doesn't really make sense. Same here. What is it supposed to be saying?
- Cristina Benjumea i I feel like it doesn't really make sense.
- Same here.
- What is it supposed to be saying?
- Do you know?
- CJ
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Cristina BenjumeaSame here. What is it supposed to be saying? Do you know?iI feel like it doesn't really make sense.
CJ
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i'm trying to say that both ppl are immensely drawn to each other.
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Why not just say that? They were immensely drawn to each other.
immensely seems like the wrong word, though. You want something that means very, but stronger. Maybe this:
They were irresistibly drawn to each other.
CJ
immensely seems like the wrong word, though. You want something that means very, but stronger. Maybe this:
They were irresistibly drawn to each other.
CJ
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