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Samsoner2 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
How can I revise this cover letter sentence?
I am using the word "customer" twice and I am trying to think of better way to write my sentence.
"Working at ____ strengthened my customer service skills and gave me the experience of interacting with customers from culturally diverse backgrounds."
Here is my revision:
"Working at ___ strengthened my customer service skills and my ability to interact with people from various cultural backgrounds."
"Working at ____ strengthened my customer service skills and gave me the experience of interacting with customers from culturally diverse backgrounds."
Here is my revision:
"Working at ___ strengthened my customer service skills and my ability to interact with people from various cultural backgrounds."
Top answer
Your revision makes the last phrase redundant. Working at ___ has strengthened my customer service skills and broadened my experience with other cultures.
- Your revision makes the last phrase redundant.
- Working at ___ has strengthened my customer service skills and broadened my experience with other cultures.
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Your revision makes the last phrase redundant.
Working at ___ has strengthened my customer service skills and broadened my experience with other cultures.
Working at ___ has strengthened my customer service skills and broadened my experience with other cultures.
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