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Faruqiumair Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

How can I rephrase the following sentences:

How can I rephrase the following sentences:

"I am an undergraduate student, having done an inspiring four-year course in Electronics Engineering from Mehran College.During these four years of study, I have strived to maintain an approach of expending independent effort in all my endeavors. After my undergraduate study I would like to refine my knowledge and skills I have gained in pursuing a graduate study in Telecommunication field"
  

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Be briefer and more to the point. The people who read these applications have little patience with verbosity: I am an undergraduate student in a four-year Electronics Engineering course at Mehran College, during which I have strived to make an independent effort in all of my studies . After graduation I would like to pursu e a postgraduate degree in telecommunications.

— Mister Micawber

  • Be briefer and more to the point.
  • The people who read these applications have little patience with verbosity: I am an undergraduate student in a four-year Electronics Engineering course at Mehran College, during which I have strived to make an independent effort in all of my studies .
  • After graduation I would like to pursu e a postgraduate degree in telecommunications.
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Be briefer and more to the point. The people who read these applications have little patience with verbosity:

I am an undergraduate student in a four-year Electronics Engineering course at Mehran College, during which I have strived to make an independent effort in all of my studies. After graduation I would like to pursue a post
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What if I add this sentence to my application essay?Will it be detected as Pilgiarism?
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It's not plagiarism as far as my revision is concerned: I formally award you full and unrestricted rights to its use.

(signed)
Mister Micawber
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Can we have private chat?so that I can share my writings more freely
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