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Rich Gagne Posted 10 years ago
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How can I re-write this sentence
. The walls of the dark elevator was made of large television screens. The elevators steel doors close, and the walls of the elevator light up, as the steel box starts to ascend fast to the top of the building.
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Welcome to the Forums, and thanks for registering with a screen name. I suggest the following: The walls of the darkened elevator were actually large television screens. The elevator doors closed, and as the steel box started to quickly ascend to the top floor of the building, the walls of the elevator lit up.
- Welcome to the Forums, and thanks for registering with a screen name.
- I suggest the following: The walls of the darkened elevator were actually large television screens.
- The elevator doors closed, and as the steel box started to quickly ascend to the top floor of the building, the walls of the elevator lit up.
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Welcome to the Forums, and thanks for registering with a screen name. I suggest the following: The walls of the darke
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