How can I re-write this sentence?

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I am trying to write a quick sentence that says that I am available to help my fellow employees AND participate in additional projects at my job.

Here is what I have:
"You can count on me to get my work done while having the flexibility to help out in the workplace." - too wordy

"I have the flexibility to help out in the workplace." - need to say something about helping my employees

"I can be available to help my co-workers and take on extra work at anytime." - too wordy

Thanks!

Clive · Accepted Answer

Who are you writing to?

It sounds like you are already employed. Or is this part of a job application?

Clive

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Be AsI am trying to write a quick sentence that says that I am available to help my fellow employees AND participate in additional projects at my job.

It sounds like you don't have enough work to do....

I am willing to do extra work by either helping my coworkers or taking on more projects.

Be As · Answer

Thanks for replying, Clive.

I'm writing a short, concise statement that I could use in a cover letter or job application. This statement will be backed up with 1 or 2 examples that I will mention from my previous job.

Be As · Answer

Thanks, AlpheccaStars!

Clive · Answer

It sounds to me like a weak and vague thing to say when applying for a job. As already mentioned, it even suggests that you don't have enough work to do in your present job.

Instead, I suggest that you focus on the skills needed for the new job. You could mention that you are able to work well as part of team.

Clive

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