How can I make this sentence sound better?

I expect that you mean people's rather than peoples'.

I have a difficulty understanding the purpose of the word "kind". I most naturally read "your own kind" as meaning "your own race/people", but from the overall meaning I wonder whether you intend it to mean "your own kind of culture". If the latter, I would just delete "kind". If the former, I'm not sure the comparison qu

Thank you, GPY. Actually, I meant to say "peoples' as in different ethnic groups." Also, what I meant by "your own kind" is "your own race." This is a translation exercise I have to teach in class, but my answer is not satisfactory enough, because it does still sound confusing even to a native speaker.

teacherJapanActually, I meant to say "peoples' as in different ethnic groups."

I see, well then technically other peoples' is not wrong, but because it is so unusual it does tend to look like a mistake for the far more common other people's.

teacherJapanAlso, what I meant by "your own kind" is "your own race."

I see, I think I' d better rewrite what I wrote. I am glad to know that the original sentence can be misleading because of the use of pronouns.Thank you!

I just came up with another idea about this confusing sentence to make it less confusing. I'd really appreciate it if you could check it for me:-)

Being internationally-minded means being able to understand other cultures, compare them with your own, and by doing so treat other peoples impartially.

teacherJapanBeing internationally-minded means being able to understand other cultures, compare them with your own, and by doing so treat other peoples impartially.

Being internationally-minded means being able to understand other cultures and compare them with your own, and by doing so treat other peoples impartially.

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That's an amazing idea!!! Thank you very much for your great suggestion:)
That would be a great help to my students, too.
I know myself that I am far from a perfect teacher or a perfect English speaker,
but I'm very determined to do whatever I can to help my students to get a lot
out of my classes