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Scryed Posted 19 years ago
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How can I make this line flow smoother and are there any grammar mistakes?

Please help!

Over the years, we have served many different businesses, from electronics to textiles and clothing, as well as furniture, to some leading fashion brand that contribute to the growth of our company.

Thanks!
  

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Scryed Please help! Over the years, we have served many different businesses, from electronics to textiles and clothing, as well as furniture, to some leading fashion brand s that contribute to the growth of our company. Thanks!

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  • Scryed Please help!
  • Over the years, we have served many different businesses, from electronics to textiles and clothing, as well as furniture, to some leading fashion brand s that contribute to the growth of our company.
  • Thanks!
  • The rest looks good.
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ScryedPlease help!

Over the years, we have served many different businesses, from electronics to textiles and clothing, as well as furniture, to some leading fashion brands that contribute to the growth of our company.

Thanks!
The rest looks good.
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"we have served many different businesses" from?

I am not sure if "from" is correct here. I would have used something like "dealing in products like". If you have served businesses dealing in products then that is in the opposite direction. I am not sure of the context if "your" company sells the products or buys them. The assumption would be sells based on "served", but that's not 1
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we don't sell or buy the products, we're shipping the product to it's destination.
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"Over the years, we have served many different businesses dealing in products such as electronics to textiles, as well as ship furniture and clothing from leading fashion companies."

How about something like that?
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ScryedPlease help!

Over the years, we have served many different businesses, from electronics to textiles and clothing, as well as furniture, to some leading fashion brand that contribute to the growth of our company.

Thanks!
Over many years of shipping, we have successfully transported electronics, textiles and clothing (including that
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