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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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He saw in the TV stories on himself and heard phrases there told to him previously by other persons.
How can I improve this sentence?
He saw in the TV stories on himself and heard phrases there told to him previously by other persons.
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I suggest: On TV, he saw stories about himself and heard phrases that he had previously heard by other people.
- I suggest: On TV, he saw stories about himself and heard phrases that he had previously heard by other people.
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I suggest: On TV, he saw stories about himself and heard phrases that he had previously heard by other people.
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