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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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How can I improve this sentence?

Hello!

This sentence feel a little bit clumsy? How can I improve it?

Value of properties owned by me in Germany from which I gain incomes neither exceed 10% of the value of all my properties nor exceed EUR 90 000.

Thank!
  

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This sentence feel a little bit clumsy? Value of properties owned by me in Germany from which I gain incomes neither exceed 10% of the value of all my properties nor exceed EUR 90 000. Thank!

— Anonymous

  • This sentence feel a little bit clumsy?
  • Value of properties owned by me in Germany from which I gain incomes neither exceed 10% of the value of all my properties nor exceed EUR 90 000.
  • Thank!
  • Value of my properties in Germany which I gain incomes from neither exceeds 10% of the value of all my properties nor € 90 000.
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AnonymousHello!This sentence feel a little bit clumsy? How can I improve it?Value of properties owned by me in Germany from which I gain incomes neither exceed 10% of the value of all my properties nor exceed EUR 90 000. Thank!
Value of my properties in Germany which I gain incomes from neither exceeds 10% of the value of all my properties nor € 90 0
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AnonymousValue of my properties in Germany which I gain incomes from neither exceeds 10% of the value of all my properties nor € 90 000.
In this formal sentence, I personally prefer the original "from which I gain ...". If the second "exceeds" is to be omitted then it should be "exceeds neither ... nor ..." not "neither exceeds ... nor ...", but I would probab
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