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Samsoner2 Posted 12 years ago
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How can I improve this sentence?
I am trying to describe all of the right things I've continuously done as a customer service representative, in order to show that I am a reliable employee.
But the sentence I've written is too long and wordy!
"I've been very successful at maintaining customer satisfaction by treating customers with respect, resolving their problems within a short amount of time and by working with others to ensure that customer issues are resolved."
But the sentence I've written is too long and wordy!
"I've been very successful at maintaining customer satisfaction by treating customers with respect, resolving their problems within a short amount of time and by working with others to ensure that customer issues are resolved."
Top answer
I've been very successful at maintaining outstanding customer satisfaction scores. I treat my customers respectfully while resolving their problems efficiently. And I network with my co-workers when they can provide expertise in remedying a difficult issue.
- I've been very successful at maintaining outstanding customer satisfaction scores.
- I treat my customers respectfully while resolving their problems efficiently.
- And I network with my co-workers when they can provide expertise in remedying a difficult issue.
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I've been very successful at maintaining outstanding customer satisfaction scores. I treat my customers respectfully while resolving their problems efficiently. And I network with my co-workers when they can provide expertise in remedying a difficult issue.
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Thank you Alphecca
Here is my revised version:
I've been very successful at maintaining outstanding customer satisfaction scores. I treat my customers with respect, I make sure to resolve customer issues in a timely fashion and I will network with my co-workers whenever I need their advice.
Here are more alternatives for the second sentence:
I treat my custom
Here is my revised version:
I've been very successful at maintaining outstanding customer satisfaction scores. I treat my customers with respect, I make sure to resolve customer issues in a timely fashion and I will network with my co-workers whenever I need their advice.
Here are more alternatives for the second sentence:
I treat my custom
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I've been very successful at maintaining outstanding customer satisfaction scores. I treat my customers with respect, I make sure to resolve customer issues in a timely fashion and I will network with my co-workers whenever I need their advice.
Your alternatives are fine.
Your alternatives are fine.
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