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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Further to the letter to you last week, we are still awaiting your response concerning the progress of takeover. Indeed, as the bid has dragged on for months but without any substantial development, there is a growing concern from several major stakeholders about further delay and even collapse of the deal. Please give us your schedule of bid by tomorrow to clarify the situation. Thank you.
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Anonymous Further to the letter sent to you last week, we are still awaiting your response concerning the progress of the takeover. Indeed, as the bid has dragged on for month s, but without any substantial development, there is a growing concern from several major stakeholders about further delay and even the likely collapse of the deal. Please give provide us with your bid schedule of bid by tomorrow to clarify the situation.
- Anonymous Further to the letter sent to you last week, we are still awaiting your response concerning the progress of the takeover.
- Indeed, as the bid has dragged on for month s, but without any substantial development, there is a growing concern from several major stakeholders about further delay and even the likely collapse of the deal.
- Please give provide us with your bid schedule of bid by tomorrow to clarify the situation.
- Thank you.
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AnonymousFurther to the letter sent to you last week, we are still awaiting your response concerning the progress of the takeover. Indeed, as the bid has dragged on for months, but without any substantial development, there is a growing concern from several major stakeholders about further delay and even the likely collapse of the deal. Please
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