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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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According to our records, this flat has yet been handed back to us after your decoration work. Based on our observations from our recent visit to the flat, some new furniture is found broken while portion of ground floor uneven, which may cause danger to the flat users. We trust you are obliged to rectify all these substandard issues before returning the flat to us.
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According to our records, this flat has not yet been handed back to us after your renovation work. During our recent visit to the flat, some new furniture was found broken, while portions of the ground floor were uneven, which may cause danger to the tenants. Please rectify these issues before returning the flat to us.
- According to our records, this flat has not yet been handed back to us after your renovation work.
- During our recent visit to the flat, some new furniture was found broken, while portions of the ground floor were uneven, which may cause danger to the tenants.
- Please rectify these issues before returning the flat to us.
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According to our records, this flat has not yet been handed back to us after your renovation work. During our recent visit to the flat, some new furniture was found broken, while portions of the ground floor were uneven, which may cause danger to the tenants. Please rectify these issues before returning the flat to us.
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