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Carter Lee Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

How can I improve the following sentences?

Hi.

I willing to improve the following sentences. But I'm not sure.so
Please help me. How can I improve the following sentences using very small change?

1.The first time when I was driving was at driving school.
2.When I was young 20 years old I was first driving.
3.When I saw the matrix that was my last movie
4.When I went to china that was my last honeymoon trip.
  

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1. The first time I drove (a car) was at driving school. 2.

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  • The first time I drove (a car) was at driving school.
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  • I was 20 years old when I first drove (a car).
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1. The first time I drove (a car) was at driving school.
2. I was 20 years old when I first drove (a car).
3. The last movie I saw was The Matrix.
The Matrix was the last movie I saw.
4. I went to China on honeymoon.
The last time I went to China was on honeymoon.

Please note the spacing after the numbers. This is incorrect spacing:

1.The
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I have question about 3 your answer.
Did you mean that after Matrix I did not see any movie more .right?
If yes, How can I write the sentence as the movie is latest movie?
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Carter LeeDid you mean that after Matrix I did not see any movie more .right?If yes, How can I write the sentence as the movie is latest movie?
Both "latest" and "last" mean that you have not seen any further movies after the one mentioned. However, "latest" suggests that you saw it recently. "last" could be any time, including years ago.
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Then how can I make structure by using 'latest'?
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Carter LeeThen how can I make structure by using 'latest'?
The latest movie I saw was The Matrix.
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Did you tell me what you used grammar structure?
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Carter LeeDid you tell me what you used grammar structure?
Sorry, that doesn't make sense. You may mean "Did you tell me what grammar structure you used?" However, I do not know what kind of answer you are expecting.

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