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Fatima55 Posted 12 years ago
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How can I improve the following note?

The teacherreferred to the problem this way:

I as a teacher would like to read the second versions of learner's' journals like the first versions, give them feedback on their journals but unfortunately, the course was too short and I couldn't really do what I wanted to do .
  

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As a teacher, I would like to have read the second versions of the learners' journals, and as with the first versions, give them feedback, but unfortunately, the course was too short and I couldn't do what I really wanted to do .

  • As a teacher, I would like to have read the second versions of the learners' journals, and as with the first versions, give them feedback, but unfortunately, the course was too short and I couldn't do what I really wanted to do .
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As a teacher, I would like to have read the second versions of the learners' journals, and as with the first versions, give them feedback, but unfortunately, the course was too short and I couldn't do what I really wanted to do .

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