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Uktous Posted 16 years ago
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How can I describe my feedback in my sentence?

Hi,

Question:

how can I describe my feedback in my setence?

My feedback is:
1) the second sentence of page 3 is wrong.
2) the first paragraph of page 5 is wrong.

Possible sentences:
sentence1:
I produced 2 comments about areas that should be corrected.
sentence2:
I produced 2 suggestions about areas that should be corrected.

Thanks
  

Top answer

Hi, Question: how can I describe my feedback in my setence? My feedback is: 1) T he second sentence of page 3 is wrong. 2) T he first paragraph of page 5 is wrong.

— Clive

  • Hi, Question: how can I describe my feedback in my setence?
  • My feedback is: 1) T he second sentence of page 3 is wrong.
  • 2) T he first paragraph of page 5 is wrong.
  • We usually say 'on', not 'of'.
  • Possible sentences: sentence1: I produced 2 comments about areas that should be corrected.
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Hi,

Question:

how can I describe my feedback in my setence?

My feedback is:
1) The second sentence of page 3 is wrong.
2) The first paragraph of page 5 is wrong.

We usually say 'on', not 'of'.

Possible sentences:
sentence1:
I produced 2 comments about areas that should be co
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Hi,

Can I ask you a further question?

Sentence:
I made 2 comments about the areas that should be corrected.

My opinion:
I am describing all areas that should be corrected (I am talking about something specific), so I think I should need "the".

Thanks
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Hi,

Can I ask you a further question?

Sentence:

I made 2 comments about the areas that should be corrected.

My opinion:

I am describing all areas that should be corrected (I am talking about something specific), so I think I should need "the". Yes, 'the' suggests that you have commented on all the areas that need correcting.
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