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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

How can I correct these sentences?

Regarding your proposed location of placing 20 metal boxes, at our warehouse, please note that your selected area is not the most desirable one from our management point of view as it may cause inconvenience to our daily maintenance work. Alternatively, the area shown in red in the attached map tends to be a better one for you and us.

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Anonymous Regarding your proposed location of for placing 20 metal boxe s at our warehouse, please note that your selected area is not the most desirable one from our managemen t's point of view as it may cause inconvenience to our daily maintenance work. Alternatively, the area shown in red in the attached map tends is likely to be a better one for you and us.

  • Anonymous Regarding your proposed location of for placing 20 metal boxe s at our warehouse, please note that your selected area is not the most desirable one from our managemen t's point of view as it may cause inconvenience to our daily maintenance work.
  • Alternatively, the area shown in red in the attached map tends is likely to be a better one for you and us.
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AnonymousRegarding your proposed location of for placing 20 metal boxes at our warehouse, please note that your selected area is not the most desirable one from our management's point of view as it may cause inconvenience to our daily maintenance work. Alternatively, the area shown in red in the attached map tends is likely

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