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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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To provide a sturdy and durable facilities to the our users, we hope you will consider to carry out a research on replacing the materials of the arbours' roofs, which are made up of wood and plastic, with metals or any other solid materials and ensure the normal discharge of water from the roofs. Thanks.
  

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To provide sturdy, durable facilities for our users, we hope you will consider replacing the the arbours' roofs, which are wood and plastic, with metal or other solid material and ensure normal runoff of water. Thanks.

  • To provide sturdy, durable facilities for our users, we hope you will consider replacing the the arbours' roofs, which are wood and plastic, with metal or other solid material and ensure normal runoff of water.
  • Thanks.
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To provide sturdy, durable facilities for our users, we hope you will consider replacing the the arbours' roofs, which are wood and plastic, with metal or other solid material and ensure normal runoff of water. Thanks.

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