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Copykurt Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

How can I change this sentence to a better one?

1. Because, it is like accepting defeat.

2. If we admit it then we will be called the losers and ingnored by the others.

3. This might be a problem of(for?) us, but also this is a problem of the society.
  

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1. Because it's like admitting defeat. 2.

  • 1.
  • Because it's like admitting defeat.
  • 2.
  • Should we admit defeat, we would be classed as losers, and ignored by the others.
  • 3.
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1. Because it's like admitting defeat.

2. Should we admit defeat, we would be classed as losers, and ignored by the others.

3. This could be a problem for us, but would also be a problem for the society.
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