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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

How can i change these sentaces

if you are at school at school and the teacher said that your doing a group project or group work or even if someone asks you for help you are going to have to talk to them and help them and if you don't especially when you are doing a group project they are going to do all the work and then you will get a bad grade on the project or group work.

if your teacher tells you that you have a test tomorrow you are going to have to study for your test and if you dont you are going to fail the test especially if a final or midterm test then you will fail the class if you dont study and then you will have to take the class again next year, go to summer school and dont graduate until you get the class made up.

i need more facts and support and i need to get rid of all passive verbs like am, are, was, were, be, been, being, has, have, had, seems, feels, appears, becomes, ect.

i need to also have more rhetorical elements like an alliteration, hyphenated modifier, similie, metaphor, magic three, ect. please help
  

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How's this? If you are at school and the teacher told you that you will be doing a group project, or even if someone asks you for help, you are going to have to talk to them and help them. If you don't, (especially when you are doing a group project) they may do all the work, leaving you will get a bad grade on the project or group work.

  • How's this?
  • If you are at school and the teacher told you that you will be doing a group project, or even if someone asks you for help, you are going to have to talk to them and help them.
  • If you don't, (especially when you are doing a group project) they may do all the work, leaving you will get a bad grade on the project or group work.
  • If your teacher tells you that you have a test tomorrow, you are going to have to study for your test.
  • If you don't, you are going to fail the test, especially if it is a final or midterm test.
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How's this?

If you are at school and the teacher told you that you will be doing a group project, or even if someone asks you for help, you are going to have to talk to them and help them. If you don't, (especially when you are doing a group project) they may do all the work, leaving you will get a bad grade on the project or group work.

If your teacher tells you that you hav

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