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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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How can I avoid repetition in these sentences?
May someone rewrite this so the word "tornado" is not used so much?
The http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/National_Weather_Service rated the tornado as an EF4 and later determined that there were two distinct tornado tracks, with an EF3 satellite tornado to the southwest of the main tornado. It was originally believed a third tornado (an EF3) touched down but it was later found to be linked to the main tornado that hit Union University.http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2008_Super_Tuesday_tornado_outbreak&action=submit#cite_note-nwsmemphisstatement-41This was the third violent tornado to hit Jackson in 10 years. Two other tornadoes, both rated F4, had devastated the community on http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/January_1999_tornado_outbreak_sequencehttp://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2008_Super_Tuesday_tornado_outbreak&action=submit#cite_note-january171999-44and http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/May_2003_tornado_outbreak_sequence.
The http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/National_Weather_Service rated the tornado as an EF4 and later determined that there were two distinct tornado tracks, with an EF3 satellite tornado to the southwest of the main tornado. It was originally believed a third tornado (an EF3) touched down but it was later found to be linked to the main tornado that hit Union University.http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2008_Super_Tuesday_tornado_outbreak&action=submit#cite_note-nwsmemphisstatement-41This was the third violent tornado to hit Jackson in 10 years. Two other tornadoes, both rated F4, had devastated the community on http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/January_1999_tornado_outbreak_sequencehttp://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2008_Super_Tuesday_tornado_outbreak&action=submit#cite_note-january171999-44and http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/May_2003_tornado_outbreak_sequence.
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Anonymous May Can someone rewrite this The rated the tornado as an EF4 and later determined that there were two distinct tornado tracks, with an EF3 satellite tornado to the southwest of the main one tornado . It was originally believed a third tornado (an EF3) touched down, but it was later found to be linked to the main one tornado that hit Union University. This was the third violent tornado to hit Jackson in 10 years.
- Anonymous May Can someone rewrite this The rated the tornado as an EF4 and later determined that there were two distinct tornado tracks, with an EF3 satellite tornado to the southwest of the main one tornado .
- It was originally believed a third tornado (an EF3) touched down, but it was later found to be linked to the main one tornado that hit Union University.
- This was the third violent tornado to hit Jackson in 10 years.
- Two other s tornadoes , both rated F4, had devastated the community on and .
- Original count: 8 Revised count: 3 CJ
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