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Gillyflower Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

How can I avoid repetition?

Hi,

How can I avoid repetition in the sentence below?

"Lipid peroxidation occurs when the oxidative stress occurs in the body as a result of ROS damage to the cell membrane, and it is one of the most important factors of damaged tissue (30) as well as carcinogenesis and mutagenesis."

Any other corrections needed?

Thanks!

  

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gillyflowerHow can I avoid repetition in the sentence below?"Lipid peroxidation occurs when the oxidative stress occurs in the body as a result of ROS damage to the cell membrane, and it is one of the most important factors of damaged tissue (30) as well as carcinogenesis and mutagenesis."

I see no repetition.

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"Lipid peroxidation occurs when the oxidative stress builds up in the body as a result of ROS damage to the cell membrane, and it is one of the most important causes of / contributors to factors damaged tissue (30) as well as carcinogenesis and mutagenesis."

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