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1b00Education is a life long task. Do you agree or disagree?02b02br
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00Nowadays, education is an important key for people to be success. Education is not only to go to school for learning, it also means that people may learn from their family, social life, their work or by themselves. They always need to promote their life, their career and I think you and me, so do we. Therefore, education is that we have spent our whole life on.02br
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00The life is a learning process. Why can I say that? After you were born, you actually have to learn many things around you day by day. You learn how to stand up, how to run, how to speak and so on. You got all basic life00’00s skills and beginning knowledge by yourselves or by your other helps. When you had enough ages, your parents sent you to school for studying. You spent your all childhood for learning, consequently you could get a good level of knowledge to find a job after leaving your schools (after graduating from high school or university). Then, you can not stop learning because you have to fight for your work. Obviously, you have to get more and more knowledge of your working field because your experience is your valuable. There are many ways to obtain it, you could join a cyber class, mine knowledge from the internet or study yourselves. And even so after retiring, you must continue studying. At that time, you learn to enjoy the rest of your time, take care yourselves and practice your health and so on. All your life is spent to learn.02br
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00In addition, everyone try to get promotion in their career. People know that nothing lasts forever. Nowadays, life has changed quickly and are higher and higher competitive. Technology and knowledge improve day by day. So, if they stop striving for that, they would be left behind, even lose their own position. Thus they should update their education all the time. Some my friends even came back university to study higher education because they wanted to have a higher position. With strong knowledge, we could easily be successful.02br
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00In summary, I think people always need to get more and more knowledge. They learn day by day to live and to advance their life. That means we spend all our lives on education, it is a lifelong task.0-