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Moguwai007 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Hotel Room

The following is a self-made sentence for a description of a hotel room. I would like to use it on a brochure.Could you please tell me if it sounds natural?
<Deluxe Twin>
Well appointed rooms with a feeling of refined elegance. Indulge yourself with this high quality spacious room, ideal for couples or friends traveling together.
  

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I would delete the last part; it is a no-brainer. Deluxe Twin Well-appointed rooms with a feeling of refined elegance. Indulge yourself with this spacious luxury room for two.

— Mister Micawber

  • I would delete the last part; it is a no-brainer.
  • Deluxe Twin Well-appointed rooms with a feeling of refined elegance.
  • Indulge yourself with this spacious luxury room for two.
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I would delete the last part; it is a no-brainer.

Deluxe Twin

Well-appointed rooms with a feeling of refined elegance. Indulge yourself with this spacious luxury room for two.
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I see. Thank you very much for your corrections.
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