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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Hotel Diamond
For an expression used in "What's New" on a website,
could you please check if the following sentences sound natural and catchy ? I wish to brush them up by rephrasing them while maintaining the elements of the existing key words.
<New Hotel Opens This Winter>
Hotel Diamond will open on January 28, 2020.
The hotel is a noteworthy property converted from an office building.
Just 8 minutes from Seattle Tacoma International Airport.
Perfect for early risers, the hotel offers a cafe for guests taking early-morning flights. It is also equipped with movie theaters and a nightclub.
could you please check if the following sentences sound natural and catchy ? I wish to brush them up by rephrasing them while maintaining the elements of the existing key words.
<New Hotel Opens This Winter>
Hotel Diamond will open on January 28, 2020.
The hotel is a noteworthy property converted from an office building.
Just 8 minutes from Seattle Tacoma International Airport.
Perfect for early risers, the hotel offers a cafe for guests taking early-morning flights. It is also equipped with movie theaters and a nightclub.
Top answer
<New Hotel Opens This Winter> Hotel Diamond will open on January 28, 2020. Just 8 minutes from Seattle-Tacoma International Airport. Perfect for early risers, the hotel offers a cafe for guests with early morning flights.
- <New Hotel Opens This Winter> Hotel Diamond will open on January 28, 2020.
- Just 8 minutes from Seattle-Tacoma International Airport.
- Perfect for early risers, the hotel offers a cafe for guests with early morning flights.
- It also has movie theaters and a nightclub.
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<New Hotel Opens This Winter>
Hotel Diamond will open on January 28, 2020.
Just 8 minutes from Seattle-Tacoma International Airport.
Perfect for early risers, the hotel offers a cafe for guests with early morning flights. It also has movie theaters and a nightclub.
Hotel Diamond will open on January 28, 2020.
Just 8 minutes from Seattle-Tacoma International Airport.
Perfect for early risers, the hotel offers a cafe for guests with early morning flights. It also has movie theaters and a nightclub.
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Thank you very much for you feedback.
I understand that the following may not sound attractive to guests.
Taking that aspect aside, just for information, I am wondering if it is intelligible.
The hotel is a noteworthy property converted from an office building.
I understand that the following may not sound attractive to guests.
Taking that aspect aside, just for information, I am wondering if it is intelligible.
The hotel is a noteworthy property converted from an office building.
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