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Moguwai007 Posted 13 years ago
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hotel brochure

For an expression in a brochure about a certain hotel brand, could you please tell me if the following self-made sentence sounds natural?
Totally designed with luxurious interior, the hotels provide guests with serenity and comfort.
  

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It doesn't sound quite right. I would suggest: "Designed with luxurious interiors throughout, the hotels provide guests with ? " I'm not sure about the missing word.

— GPY

  • It doesn't sound quite right.
  • I would suggest: "Designed with luxurious interiors throughout, the hotels provide guests with ?
  • " I'm not sure about the missing word.
  • "serenity" seems too much for a hotel – unless, I suppose, it is in a particularly tranquil and peaceful location, or is specially designed for people who want to get away from the noise and rush of modern life.
  • Is that the case?
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It doesn't sound quite right. I would suggest:

"Designed with luxurious interiors throughout, the hotels provide guests with ? and comfort."

I'm not sure about the missing word. "serenity" seems too much for a hotel – unless, I suppose, it is in a particularly tranquil and peaceful location, or is specially designed for people who want to get away from the noise and rush of moder
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Dear GPY, Thank you very much for your reply. The missing word is serenity, but after reading your comment,what I really meat was relaxation.
Could you please tell me if the following expression sounds OK for an expression in a brochure?
"Designed with luxurious interiors throughout, the hotels provide guests with relaxation and comfort."
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It's hard to provide relaxation.
"Designed with luxurious interiors throughout, the hotels provide guests with comfort in an ambiance of quietude and tranquility."
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Thank you for your advice. It's very informative. I appreciate it.
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