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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Host of my family

Please check out the following paragraph.

(1) My mother is the host of my family, like a superwoman.

(2) I know she loves me very much, but sometimes she is stubborn and rigid.

(3) Her thoughts are old-fashioned, too.

(4) No matter what, I still love her.
  

Top answer

Hi, All OK except that 'host' is not a suitable word. Try to find another. I don't clearly understand what you mean.

  • Hi, All OK except that 'host' is not a suitable word.
  • Try to find another.
  • I don't clearly understand what you mean.
  • Clive
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3 Answers
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Hi,

All OK except that 'host' is not a suitable word. Try to find another. I don't clearly understand what you mean.

Clive
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(1) My mother is the household head of my family, like a superwoman. or
My mothr is the head of my family, like a superwoman.
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Hi,

Just say 'the head of my family'.

Clive

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