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Vasuarm Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Hospitality
Please correct the following sentences. Thank you.
“Feeling thirsty, ma’m? Want tender coconut or coffee? I will take you to a good kiosk on the way”, the driver spoke good English. He smiled too. I didn’t answer him as I was in a trance unable to piece together the reasons behind the sudden attitudinal changes I saw in the auto-man. Who brought such a perceptible metamorphosis into the moving tyrannies? When did this phenomenon take place? Is it a reality or am I dreaming? “Your destination, sir”, the driver stirred me out of my trance. I got down; he checked his meter and told me the fare. It was twenty-rupees only. I stood wonder-struck thinking how many times I had given eighty-rupees to auto men for the same distance.
“Feeling thirsty, ma’m? Want tender coconut or coffee? I will take you to a good kiosk on the way”, the driver spoke good English. He smiled too. I didn’t answer him as I was in a trance unable to piece together the reasons behind the sudden attitudinal changes I saw in the auto-man. Who brought such a perceptible metamorphosis into the moving tyrannies? When did this phenomenon take place? Is it a reality or am I dreaming? “Your destination, sir”, the driver stirred me out of my trance. I got down; he checked his meter and told me the fare. It was twenty-rupees only. I stood wonder-struck thinking how many times I had given eighty-rupees to auto men for the same distance.
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I don't get the above corrected. Forum: ESL General English Grammar Questions Posted: Oct 22, 4:46 PM [GMT 0] Post Subject: [url=""]Hospitality[/url] Post author: [url=""]vasuarm[/url] Please correct the following sentences. Thank you.
- I don't get the above corrected.
- Forum: ESL General English Grammar Questions Posted: Oct 22, 4:46 PM [GMT 0] Post Subject: [url=""]Hospitality[/url] Post author: [url=""]vasuarm[/url] Please correct the following sentences.
- Thank you.
- “Feeling thirsty, ma’m?
- Want tender coconut or coffee?
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I don't get the above corrected.
Forum: ESL General English Grammar Questions
Posted: Oct 22, 4:46 PM [GMT 0]
Post Subject: [url=""]Hospitality[/url]
Post author: [url=""]vasuarm[/url]
Please correct the following sentences. Thank you.
“Feeling thirsty, ma’m? Want tender coconut or coffee? I will take you to a good kiosk on the way”, the driver spoke good En
Forum: ESL General English Grammar Questions
Posted: Oct 22, 4:46 PM [GMT 0]
Post Subject: [url=""]Hospitality[/url]
Post author: [url=""]vasuarm[/url]
Please correct the following sentences. Thank you.
“Feeling thirsty, ma’m? Want tender coconut or coffee? I will take you to a good kiosk on the way”, the driver spoke good En
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Hi Vasuarm
You apparently clicked on the "Report this", which is intended for reporting spam posts. Reporting a post as spam would normally result in the post being deleted.
Anyway, here are my suggestions for your text:
“Feeling thirsty, ma’am? Want tender coconut or coffee? I will take you to a good kiosk on the way
You apparently clicked on the "Report this", which is intended for reporting spam posts. Reporting a post as spam would normally result in the post being deleted.
Anyway, here are my suggestions for your text:
“Feeling thirsty, ma’am? Want tender coconut or coffee? I will take you to a good kiosk on the way
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