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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Hope you can help me

Hi everybody,
I need to send this e-mail to my professor. Can you please help me to revise the format and corret my gramatical mistakes? I will really appreciate your help and time!!
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Dear professor Wolf,

I was one of your students last spring at Pepperdine University. I am writing to schedule a meeting with you to talk about the class Eng1b.

I am available any day after 10:00 AM. Please let me know what is the best time for you. My cell number is (408)xxx-xxxx or by replying to this message.

Thank you for your time.

Sincerely,
Sonia
  

Top answer

H i, Here's are a couple of general comments. You need to politely request a meeting, instead of just assuming you can have one. It seems you are not currently his student.

  • H i, Here's are a couple of general comments.
  • You need to politely request a meeting, instead of just assuming you can have one.
  • It seems you are not currently his student.
  • Perhaps you should explain a bit more what you want to discuss with him.
  • Try again, if you wish.
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Hi,

Here's are a couple of general comments.

You need to politely request a meeting, instead of just assuming you can have one.

It seems you are not currently his student. Perhaps you should explain a bit more what you want to discuss w
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Hi Clive, thank you for you great observation.
Yes, I will try it again.
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Dear professor Wolf,

I was one of your Eng1b students last spring at Pepperdine University. I am writing to request a meeting with you to talk about my papers.

I am available any day after 10:00 AM. Please let me know if I can schedule a meeting with you and what is the best time for you. My
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Hi,

Dear Professor Wolf,

I was one of your Eng1b students last spring at Pepperdine University. I am writing to request a meeting with you to talk about my papers. I suggest a bit more detail abut what you want from him.

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Thank you so much Clive for your help!

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