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Once there was a woodcutter. One day he was cutting some wood near a river. Suddenly, his axe fell into the river. He did not know how to swim, he became sad and started crying. A river angel, who heard him crying, appeared and asked him the reason for crying. The woodcutter told him about his axe. The angel took pity on him and dived into the river. He brought out a golden axe; but the woodcutter said that it/that (which one is correct it or that) was not his axe. The angel dived into the river again. This time he brought out a silver axe. This time, too, the woodcutter refused to take the axe. The angel dived into the river for the third time. This time he brought out an iron axe. "Yes. Yes, it's my axe.", the woodcutter cried with joy. The angel was so impressed by his honestly; he gave him the other two axes as a reward.
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You need to avoid so much repetition of words. It's very unnatural. That's what almost all these edits address.
- You need to avoid so much repetition of words.
- It's very unnatural.
- That's what almost all these edits address.
- Once there was a woodcutter.
- One day he was working near a river.
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You need to avoid so much repetition of words. .It's very unnatural. That's what almost all these edits address.
Once there was a woodcutter. One day he was working near a river. Suddenly, his axe fell into the water. He did not know how to swim, so he became sad and started crying. A river angel, who heard him crying, appeared and asked him what was wrong
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