Home Work?

Hello there!

I've got the next homework that I would like to check:

Your friend Leyla had a birthday party yesterday. Leyla invited you to the party but you couldn’t go.
Write a note to Leyla. In your note:

• tell her why you couldn’t go to the party
• ask her what happened at the party
• invite her to do something with you next weekend.

Write about 70 words.

Here goes my mail:

Hey, Leyla. I am so sorry that I didn't get to the party last night. Unfortunately, I got seek and was laying with a bloody fever in the bad all day long! Today, I feel much better. How did it go? Was it a total mess? Or you celebrated in a modest way? You know what? Please, let me redeem myself. Do you fancy go to the cinema? I heard there is a great comedy movie going called "Mr. Joke". Just look at the title! So, I'm looking forward to meeting you, hit me a message If you are in.

Thanks for your help in advance, I really appreciate it.