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Candle tile 850 Posted 9 years ago
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Holidays

I would like to know which of the two is more correct:

1. Dear Colleagues,

Please be informed that the xxxxx offices in xxx will be closed Tomorrow, xx August 2017, on the occasion of the celebration of xxx day, observed at xxx.

2. Dear Colleagues,

Please be informed that xxxx offices in xxx, will be closed tomorrow xx August 2017 due to xxx day observed at xxxxx.

Thanks

  

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1. Dear Colleagues, Please be informed that the xxxxx offices in *** will be closed tomorrow , xx August 2017, on the occasion of the celebration of *** day, observed at ***. 2.

— Clive

  • 1.
  • Dear Colleagues, Please be informed that the xxxxx offices in *** will be closed tomorrow , xx August 2017, on the occasion of the celebration of *** day, observed at ***.
  • 2.
  • Dear Colleagues, Please be informed that xxxx offices in ***, will be closed tomorrow comma xx August 2017 comma due to *** day, which will be observed at xxxxx.
  • Y ou don't really need to say 'Please be informed that'.
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1. Dear Colleagues,

Please be informed that the xxxxx offices in *** will be closed tomorrow, xx August 2017, on the occasion of the celebration of *** day, observed at ***.

2. Dear Colleagues,

Please be informed that xxxx offices in ***, will be closed tomorrow comma xx August 2017 comma due to *** day, which will be observed at xxxxx.

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