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Angliholic Posted 18 years ago
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holding up a collapsing roof while the people inside ran to safety

0One story01b00 tells of02b00 Milo 01b00holding up02b00 a collapsing roof while the people inside 01b00ran to safety02b00.02br
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00One story01b00 tells about02b00 Milo 01b00holding02b00 a collapsing roof while the people inside 01b00ran to the safe places.02b02br
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00Hi,02br
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00Does the second in the above sound as good as the first? Thanks.0-
  

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02br 02br 00the safe places is just a complication and doesn't sound as good. Which safe places? 0-

— Nona the brit

  • 02br 02br 00the safe places is just a complication and doesn't sound as good.
  • Which safe places?
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0No, afraid not.02br
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00Stories tell of not tell about (people might tell you about something).02br
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00He wasn't just holding the roof, he was holding it up.02br
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00the safe places is just a complication and doesn't sound as good. Which safe places? It sounds as though there were special allocated safe places - safety is wid
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11b10Stories tell of not tell about12b10 (people might tell you about something).12br
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10the safe places is just a complication and doesn't sound as good. Which safe places? It sounds as though there were special allocated safe places - 11b10safety is
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