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XHealthY Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Hola, I need correction on my essay

My neightborhood
What I like about my neighborhood is that my neighbors are nice. But there's a problem with parking lots. We end up fighting about it. The houses are together from eachother. I love it though, it's very quiet. The neighborhood has a real sense of community. What I dislike about my neightborhood is that unknown people keeps stealing our stuff at night!

PS: I need to write three paragraph and a conclusion.
What should I write about. Could I write about my neighbors in the first paragraph? And why I love my neightborhood for the 2nd paragraph? and Why I dislike my neighborhood for the 3rd paragraph?
  

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xHealthY My neigh t borhood What I like about my neighborhood is that my neighbors are nice. But there's a problem with parking lots . We end up fighting about it.

— Yankee

  • xHealthY My neigh t borhood What I like about my neighborhood is that my neighbors are nice.
  • But there's a problem with parking lots .
  • We end up fighting about it.
  • The houses are together from eachother too close to each other ( Is that what you mean?
  • ).
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xHealthY My neightborhood
What I like about my neighborhood is that my neighbors are nice. But there's a problem with parking lots. We end up fighting about it. The houses are to
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I am going to start writing and then show it to you. Emotion: smile

Thanks for the help. I will try my best! This is a test.
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