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To me, the Russian Octobor Revolution of 1917 made a deeply impression on me. I see Russian people have insightful patriotism; the great, revolutionists gave themselves to country wholeheartedly. One hundred yeas, that is a very long time, but valuable histories are still there. They go deep into subconscious of the people in here, as well as international friends. The Russian October Revolution has changed destiny of the country. Specially, it was one of the greatest events that were influential the history of the world.
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Hi I think you've got all the ideas there. I've made one or two small changes but only so that you can compare them. I'd say: no need to use 'me' twice at the beginning; in some places you need a 'the'; and 'Specially' didn't sound quite right, so I changed the last sentence.
- Hi I think you've got all the ideas there.
- I've made one or two small changes but only so that you can compare them.
- I'd say: no need to use 'me' twice at the beginning; in some places you need a 'the'; and 'Specially' didn't sound quite right, so I changed the last sentence.
- - The Russian October Revolution of 1917 made a deep impression on me.
- I see Russian people have insightful patriotism; the great, revolutionists gave themselves to the country wholeheartedly.
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I think you've got all the ideas there. I've made one or two small changes but only so that you can compare them. I'd say: no need to use 'me' twice at the beginning; in some places you need a 'the'; and 'Specially' didn't sound quite right, so I changed the last sentence.
- The Russian October Revolution of 1917 made a deep impression on me. I see Russian people have insightf
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