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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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His placing emphasis on

Letcher’s vested interest in environmentalism as a chemistry Lecturer compels his placing emphasis on carbon dioxide’s adverse environmental effects within the dominion of climate change.

I don't like this sentence at all I don't like the gerund 'his placing emphasis' on, nor do I like 'dominion of climate change'.

Please can you try and improve it please?

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Letcher’s vested interest in environmentalism as a chemistry lecturer compels him to emphasize the adverse environmental effects of carbon dioxide on climate change.

— Mister Micawber

  • Letcher’s vested interest in environmentalism as a chemistry lecturer compels him to emphasize the adverse environmental effects of carbon dioxide on climate change.
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Letcher’s vested interest in environmentalism as a chemistry lecturer compels him to emphasize the adverse environmental effects of carbon dioxide on climate change.
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