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Mr. Tom Posted 16 years ago
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His office was one and a half hour drive from my place.

Hi

Do you find the following lines natural? Any suggestions are welcome.

His office was one and a half hour drive from my place. The way I reached there is a whole story in itself, and I will spare you that along with the sordid details of a few snags that I ran into one after the other. I was sure fate had decided that my meeting with this guy should not materialize.

Thanks for your time,

Tom
  

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His office was (a) one and a half hour drive from my place. ) I was sure fate had decided that my meeting with this guy should not materialize. Just a few things to consider.

— Ed_shaw

  • His office was (a) one and a half hour drive from my place.
  • ) I was sure fate had decided that my meeting with this guy should not materialize.
  • Just a few things to consider.
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His office was (a) one and a half hour drive from my place. The way I (got) there is a whole story in itself(.) (I) will spare you that, along with the sordid details of a few snags that I ran into, one after the other, (on the way.) I was sure fate had decided that my meeting with this guy should not materialize.

Just a few things to consider.
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