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Navitasan Posted 11 years ago
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His neck broken
Is this correct:
1) As I was approaching him from behind, I thought he was sitting on the ground, leaning on a tree. It was only when I reached him and went around him to talk to him that I realized he was dead, his neck broken.
Gratefully,
Navi.
1) As I was approaching him from behind, I thought he was sitting on the ground, leaning on a tree. It was only when I reached him and went around him to talk to him that I realized he was dead, his neck broken.
Gratefully,
Navi.
Top answer
Stylistically, you have taken a wrong turn. As I approached him from behi nd, he was sitting on the ground, leaning on a tree. It was only when I reached him and stepped around to talk to him that I realized he was dead, his neck broken.
- Stylistically, you have taken a wrong turn.
- As I approached him from behi nd, he was sitting on the ground, leaning on a tree.
- It was only when I reached him and stepped around to talk to him that I realized he was dead, his neck broken.
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Stylistically, you have taken a wrong turn.
As I approached him from behind, he was sitting on the ground, leaning on a tree. It was only when I reached him and stepped around to talk to him that I realized he was dead, his neck broken.
As I approached him from behind, he was sitting on the ground, leaning on a tree. It was only when I reached him and stepped around to talk to him that I realized he was dead, his neck broken.
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