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Teal lime Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

His favorite videos of his daughter

Would you please check and improve the grammar of the following sentence? Thank you.

In/On his computer, he has created a folder in which he regularly saves his favorite videos of his daughter / his favorite videos featuring or starring his daughter / his favorite videos in which his daughter appears.

  

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He has created a folder on his computer where he regularly saves his favorite videos of his daughter. CJ

  • He has created a folder on his computer where he regularly saves his favorite videos of his daughter.
  • CJ
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He has created a folder on his computer where he regularly saves his favorite videos of his daughter.

CJ

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