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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Hi,please somebody correct/edit this sentence pls for me,thank you so much.

i dont need eyes to see, nor a touch to feel, but what we have is what i called reality, and illusion is yet better than the fact that we could build off life out of what we have someday...

im not a native english speaker, so dont mock me for my grammar errors
  

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This might be an improvement. I had trouble making sense of the sentence. I don't need eyes to see or touch to feel.

  • This might be an improvement.
  • I had trouble making sense of the sentence.
  • I don't need eyes to see or touch to feel.
  • What we have is what I call reality.
  • Illusion is better than the fact that we could build a life out of what we have, someday.
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This might be an improvement. I had trouble making sense of the sentence.

I don't need eyes to see or touch to feel. What we have is what I call reality. Illusion is better than the fact that we could build a life out of what we have, someday.

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