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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
Hi,Please help me check and revise this short letter for job application:-)
Dear Sir,
Kindly please spend a short time on this introduction letter from Kevin Xu.
I worked at a professional garment manufacturer for over three years after graduation.
During this time,I developed excellent skills in various fields of export,such as documents making,
cargo transporation,business E-mail writing,fabric sourcing.All of them enable me to correspond with
buyers and suppliers in an useful and efficient way.Furthermore,I gradually have the ability to find where the
potential customer is,what is their real need and how can get a new valuable customer in lowest cost.
Also I built a good relationship with several good fabric & accessories suppliers as well as freight forwarders,
and help my current employer obtaining some important new clients.
Always I have a desire to work for a respectable company just like your firm,where providing a larger promoting
space and higher salary than what I earned now.The most important reason for my choice is that the outstanding performance
and warm atmosphere in the work stuff of your company.
Hope to have a chance for inverview.Thanks.
Kevin Xu
Please help me with the grammer accuracy and pick up the awkward and wordy sentences for me.
I would appreciate very much if anyone can give me some help.
Kindly please spend a short time on this introduction letter from Kevin Xu.
I worked at a professional garment manufacturer for over three years after graduation.
During this time,I developed excellent skills in various fields of export,such as documents making,
cargo transporation,business E-mail writing,fabric sourcing.All of them enable me to correspond with
buyers and suppliers in an useful and efficient way.Furthermore,I gradually have the ability to find where the
potential customer is,what is their real need and how can get a new valuable customer in lowest cost.
Also I built a good relationship with several good fabric & accessories suppliers as well as freight forwarders,
and help my current employer obtaining some important new clients.
Always I have a desire to work for a respectable company just like your firm,where providing a larger promoting
space and higher salary than what I earned now.The most important reason for my choice is that the outstanding performance
and warm atmosphere in the work stuff of your company.
Hope to have a chance for inverview.Thanks.
Kevin Xu
Please help me with the grammer accuracy and pick up the awkward and wordy sentences for me.
I would appreciate very much if anyone can give me some help.
Top answer
Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of ...... I have worked at a professional garment manufacturer for over three years since graduation. During this time,I have developed excellent skills in the field of export, such as documentation, cargo transporation,business E-mail writing and fabric sourcing.
- Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of ......
- I have worked at a professional garment manufacturer for over three years since graduation.
- During this time,I have developed excellent skills in the field of export, such as documentation, cargo transporation,business E-mail writing and fabric sourcing.
- These enable me to correspond with buyers and suppliers in an useful and efficient way.
- Furthermore, I have developed the ability to find potential customers, define their needs, and how we can meet those needs to win a valuable new customer.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for the position of ......
I have worked at a professional garment manufacturer for over three years since graduation.
During this time,I have d
I am writing to apply for the position of ......
I have worked at a professional garment manufacturer for over three years since graduation.
During this time,I have d
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